diff --git a/docs/dev/uplink.rst b/docs/dev/uplink.rst index 4d48168d3de863f76b01d6536aca85cd888b3899..45649c2ab1a0c73c36f5226e820749ae9b192613 100644 --- a/docs/dev/uplink.rst +++ b/docs/dev/uplink.rst @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ After the VPN connection has been established, the node should be able to reach the mesh's DNS servers and use these for all other name resolution. If a device has only a single Ethernet port (or group of ports), it will be -used as an uplink port even when it is not labelled as "WAN" by default. This +used as an uplink port even when it is not labeled as "WAN" by default. This behavior can be controlled using the ``interfaces.single.default_roles`` site.conf option. It is also possible to alter the interface assignment after installation by modifying ``/etc/config/gluon`` and running diff --git a/docs/package/gluon-mesh-wireless-sae.rst b/docs/package/gluon-mesh-wireless-sae.rst index 7572580e99a50e85ee300e25b4b3b718c2f93efe..59bfd6c3dd84b6e87f6ab50d614f87c28bc57c3f 100644 --- a/docs/package/gluon-mesh-wireless-sae.rst +++ b/docs/package/gluon-mesh-wireless-sae.rst @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ wifi.mesh.sae_passphrase \: optional - sets a shared secret used to authenticate any two mesh nodes, crucial for private mesh networks - should not be set, if the shared secret is shared with untrusted - third parties, like in a publish mesh network + third parties, like in a public mesh network - defaults to an autogenerated value derived from ``prefix6`` diff --git a/docs/releases/v2018.2.1.rst b/docs/releases/v2018.2.1.rst index 3f02f8882bc0008a81ddb0c066e3864d1fd01366..f486d29e5ca0c55e337a1be4e9af8da25793ea2a 100644 --- a/docs/releases/v2018.2.1.rst +++ b/docs/releases/v2018.2.1.rst @@ -47,26 +47,26 @@ Bugfixes This was visible on the status page and several map implementations. The new implementation uses netlink instead of parsing `/proc/net/if_inet6`. -* Fixes a localization issue in gluon-config-mode-geo-location which +* Fixes a localization issue in gluon-config-mode-geo-location which resulted in a partial translation of the wizard's location section text. (`#1611 <https://github.com/freifunk-gluon/gluon/issues/1611>`_) * Fixes the display of the improved memory usage estimation in gluon-status-page - This change was actually already merged in time for v2018.2 but the + This change was actually already merged in time for v2018.2 but the JavaScript was not rebuilt. -* Fixes automatic updates for several devices by adding and updating +* Fixes automatic updates for several devices by adding and updating the autoupdater image names This affects the following devices: - * GL.iNet GL-AR150, + * GL.iNet GL-AR150 * GL.iNet GL-AR300M * GL.iNet GL-AR750 * Raspberry Pi Model B+ Rev 1.2 -* Fixes the primary MAC address selection for Unifi AC +* Fixes the primary MAC address selection for Unifi AC Lite/Mesh/Pro/Mesh Pro (`#1629 <https://github.com/freifunk-gluon/gluon/issues/1629>`_) * Fixes low data rate selection for multicast and management frames on @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ Bugfixes A patchset has been backported that notifies these drivers of requested data rate changes -* Fixes the data rate selection in ath10k and ath10k-ct when no +* Fixes the data rate selection in ath10k and ath10k-ct when no `mcast_rate` is configured (`#1657 <https://github.com/freifunk-gluon/gluon/pull/1657>`_) Previously a missing mcast_rate could result in broken 5 GHz connectivity @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ Scheduled domain switch ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Gluon has support for multiple domains since its v2018.1 release. -The scheduled domain switch allows for reliable migrations between +The scheduled domain switch allows for reliable migrations between domains at a preconfigured time. This can be useful for communities that, among other things, plan to @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Improved frequency band distribution of dual-band radios A new algorithm that improves the distribution of dual-band radios was added. They will now be evenly distributed between the 2.4 and 5 GHz -band, with a preference towards 2.4 GHz. +band, with a preference towards 2.4 GHz. If a device has only a single dual-band radio, like the AVM FRITZ!WLAN Repeater 300E, it will be configured for 2.4 GHz. diff --git a/docs/releases/v2019.1.rst b/docs/releases/v2019.1.rst index 43f5c3e752ca390143be25c3d93dc6a16f98d41a..d7f55b2a4bb52a6abaac611a5fef35f9c7957e0d 100644 --- a/docs/releases/v2019.1.rst +++ b/docs/releases/v2019.1.rst @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ Bugfixes (`#1777 <https://github.com/freifunk-gluon/gluon/issues/1777>`_) * Fixes cross-domain leakage of respondd data by not joining the link-local multicast group on br-client. Nodes will - not be answering respondd queries on ``[ff02::2:1001]:1001`` anymore. Respondd queries using that address must be + not be answering respondd queries on ``[ff02::2:1001]:1001`` anymore. Respondd queries using that address must be updated to the new address ``[ff05::2:1001]:1001``. (`#1701 <https://github.com/freifunk-gluon/gluon/issues/1701>`_) @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ site.mk * The variable ``DEVICES`` that controls which devices to build images for has been renamed to ``GLUON_DEVICES``. (`#1686 <https://github.com/freifunk-gluon/gluon/pull/1686>`_) -* The ``gluon-radvd`` package is now included by default and can be dropped from *FEATURES* and *GLUON_SITE_PACKGES*. +* The ``gluon-radvd`` package is now included by default and can be dropped from *FEATURES* and *GLUON_SITE_PACKAGES*. site.conf ========= diff --git a/docs/user/site.rst b/docs/user/site.rst index 7e13ad40a726c7cc478be31ff34cbdf0bb909948..6adba8c09a5d509be38e550e57fda86e7a02becc 100644 --- a/docs/user/site.rst +++ b/docs/user/site.rst @@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ interfaces \: optional }, For devices that have two distinct Ethernet ports or port groups (often - labelled WAN and LAN), the ``lan`` and ``wan`` sections are used. When there + labeled WAN and LAN), the ``lan`` and ``wan`` sections are used. When there is only one port (group), ``single`` is used instead. Available interface roles: @@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ flags using a flexible ruleset defined in the Gluon repo or site package feeds. To some extent, it will even allow us to further modularize existing Gluon packages, without necessitating changes to existing site configurations. -It is still possible to override such automatic rules by removing them using +It is still possible to override such automatic rules by removing them using *packages* in the ``image-customization.lua`` file (e.g., ``features { '-gluon-status-page-mesh-batman-adv' }`` to remove the automatically added package *gluon-status-page-mesh-batman-adv*). @@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ disable_factory() Disables factory image generation. Sysupgrade images are still generated and stored in the image output directory. -Technically, the image customzation file is evaluated once for each device, allowing +Technically, the image customization file is evaluated once for each device, allowing to make use of regular Lua *if* statements for device-specific configuration as can be seen in the example.